Mary played her guitar for me
She sat cross-legged on the forest floor,
next to the mossy rock,
the burned out trees.
Mary cried back into the wind.
The music moved like white stones,
falling into liquid autumnal amber,
darker inky umber,
under rocks, fallen trees,
in the late afternoon shadows.
Mary sang of summer,
recapitulated night like laughing bandits,
we stole our way into Culver's pond.
How deliciously cool.
Suddenly the bright spotlight,
running through moonlit woods.
I wore your brother Lee's clothes home as I climbed through
the basement window in the morning.
The strawberry scent, close, near you, yes you.
I dreamed their vines entangling you, entangling me,
as if we were a part of that growing thing.
I hear your song
rolling down this wooded hill.
At times it is distant;
it dissipates into the silence of my own footfall.
Often I come near into overwhelmed.
I stop.
Carefully listen.
I watch you sitting here now
in your carefree, cross-legged posture.
Now like a Rose Picasso,
Now a quiet red tree,
falling lower leafless,darkened, branches.
A walking stick to a man,
leading a boy up this fire path,
to the bridge,
over Mary's creek.






Ok, this is getting almost spooky surreal. I have a brother named Lee.
Whoa. Prema is dreaming Doug dreaming Mary. ;)
beautiful…
only one line caught me…
'Often I come near into overwhelmed.'
does it work?
so lovely, evocative… thank you for this
Hi Hummy !
I agree, I must have tripped and Mary broke a string or a nail.
It should feel like a log floating in the surf line that finally comes to rest briefly on the sand before another wave washes over it. The pause should be more graceful like:
“Often I am overwhelmed by your stillness.
I rest”
Thank you for pointing that out!
Thank you Nicole for the visit with me to Mary's creek! This is a place near me in the redwoods where my son and I walk frequently. It's a place of overwelming power and music.
sounds good!